Welcome to my blog. I am a student at Kaniere School in Hokitika, NZ.
It was an exciting day wasn't it Greta. You have worked hard to try and include some descriptive words such as fluttering and gently. Your poem makes me feel like I can see what you could see. I really like the way you described the mountains.
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It was an exciting day wasn't it Greta. You have worked hard to try and include some descriptive words such as fluttering and gently. Your poem makes me feel like I can see what you could see. I really like the way you described the mountains.
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