Hi Maddison it Greta from Room three Kaniere school Hokitika this is my writing I don't think I need to work on punctuation it was very hard to do my little miss writing. I think I did a very god job.Little Miss tidy up is a very nice person and m=Mr messy.
I like your little miss
ReplyDeleteHi from Room 3. We really enjoyed reading your story and looking at your picture. We loved the ending.
ReplyDeletehallo greta I liked your little miss
ReplyDeletehello Greta Great job I Love the starting of your story
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ReplyDeleteI like your miss rithing
ReplyDeleteHi Greta great job with your writing.
ReplyDeleteIt reminds me of my brothers messing up my room.
Next time you could work on your punctuation.
Hi Maddison it Greta from Room three Kaniere school Hokitika this is my writing I don't think I need to work on punctuation it was very hard to do my little miss writing. I think I did a very god job.Little Miss tidy up is a very nice person and m=Mr messy.
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DeleteHi Greta great job with your writing.
ReplyDeleteIt reminds me of my brothers messing up my room.
Next time you could work on your punctuation.