Wednesday, 4 May 2016

Mr and Little Miss Writing

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  1. I like your little miss

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  2. Hi from Room 3. We really enjoyed reading your story and looking at your picture. We loved the ending.

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  3. hallo greta I liked your little miss

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  4. hello Greta Great job I Love the starting of your story



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  6. I like your miss rithing

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  7. Hi Greta great job with your writing.
    It reminds me of my brothers messing up my room.
    Next time you could work on your punctuation.

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    1. Hi Maddison it Greta from Room three Kaniere school Hokitika this is my writing I don't think I need to work on punctuation it was very hard to do my little miss writing. I think I did a very god job.Little Miss tidy up is a very nice person and m=Mr messy.

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  8. Hi Greta great job with your writing.
    It reminds me of my brothers messing up my room.
    Next time you could work on your punctuation.

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